Feed back

For both my front cover and my contents page, three people gave me feed back, they told me what they liked about my work and what they thought could be improved.

The first person

Good number of cover lines
Good picture of model
Change the position of bar code on front cover, too big.
Could order the page numbers in the contents page.
Good contents page, small picture could be brightened?
Good house style.

The second person

Beautiful font for title on front page.
Good contrast between font "hot or not" and "Lacey une" on front cover.
Shadow under her hand could be removed?
Choice of font-good.
Content on contents page relevant.

The third person

I really like the font for the title because it looks different to others and it suits how the model is dressed up. the colours also match really well and everything looks good.
I like the boxes on the contents because it makes it look neat and all the different fonts make it look really interesting.
I think the font for "Contents" looks too much because so far its all neat.
The content of the contents page is good.

I will take some of this information into consideration and add changes to my front cover and contents page.