I took into consideration what my critics said about my front cover and contents page and changed a couple of things, i feel this improved my magazine as a whole.

On my front cover I made the bar code smaller and the strap line at the bottom longer and moved the text into the middle of the strap line. Where as originally the bar code was a lot bigger and looked too stretched and the strap like looked very small.

On my contents page I made the little picture shown to be the models album brighter so that the viewers could see it better and made the text of the title black rather then white so it stood out more. Originally the album was a lot darker with white text across it.

This is now what my front cover and contents page look like.